October 23, 2010
The Potential Redemption of Villains…

From the forthcoming Revelations of Darkened Souls

Lightning struck the ground, crackle-walking between trees, briefly illuminating a hunched, hooded shape on a nearby path. The path was steep, and the person moved slowly but steadily through the torrential downpour, approaching the unlit castle. Once inside the barbican, the figure stopped, leaning its back against the wall under an overhang, breathing heavily, a hand gently caressing its rounded abdomen. She looked back at the valley below, and wondered where her pursuers were. She hadn’t seen them, but she knew they were there. He would never let her escape…

“Who is it?” came a deep, melodic voice. “Show yourself!”

The figure moved into the courtyard. The rolling clouds above thundered and flashed; For an instant, she saw water cascading over blue scales, great white wings stretched up, a head with long teeth and silver horns.

“My name is Danelle,” the figure said, pulling back its hood. She bowed, letting her long, wet blond tresses fall over her face. She brushed them aside. “I beg your indulgence.”

“My mother has told me about you,” said Hassakkor with disgust. “You are not one of our friends.”

“That may be so,” Danelle said. “I’ve made… mistakes.” She paused, wincing. “It’s very important that I go to Caerelon. I must speak to Kaylen Thyr.”

“No,” said the dragon. “I am tasked with protecting this place.”

“I’m familiar with your mother’s teachings,” the woman stated. “I believe mercy was among them.” Exhausted, she dropped to her knees in the mud. “I am in great danger. Please.”

Hassakkor looked at her carefully, considering.

“You are with child,” he said.

“Yes,” she whispered. Even above the roar of the storm, Hassakkor heard her.

He reached one of his great paws toward her…

September 17, 2010
Of Love, Bathrooms, and Laser Pistols

I’ve been very busy recently, with programming and life and writing and… well, stuff. This passage is from the the third act of Revelations of Darkened Souls, the forthcoming sequel to A Journey of Dragons. I’ll be posting more int he coming weeks… as always, this is preliminary text, from before major editorial passes and final polishing. :)

Norgrim is the leader of the Loreseeker dwarves, a sect devoted to the acquisition of knowledge; Kalinda is his daughter. Alanora is the leader of Caerelon, the only remaining major human city in the world, and Zarah is a young woman who’s their friend. And now for the story segment…

“Where is Gyre?” Alanora asked.

“Fifty leagues northwest,” Kalinda told her. “They’ll take Zarah there by underground steamrail, but the terminus on this end is under the Theorist compound. There has to be some other way to get there quickly.”

“Are you insane?” Norgrim yelled. Alanora shot the dwarf a look he’d only seen once before, and his blood froze.

“Norgrim, take the viricide to Caerelon,” Alanora ordered. Norgrim started to object; her eyes told him it would be unwise. “Make it look like I’ve gone with you.”

“No!” Norgrim burst forth. “We’re lucky to have gotten out of this as well as we have. Zarah accepted the sacrifice.”

“Then she made a bad choice,” said Alanora. “There is no Caerelon if we abandon our principles. I will not leave Zarah behind to be picked apart and murdered.”

“Where do you keep your toys, father?” Kalinda asked.

“What toys…”

“Where?” she demanded.

“What are you talking about?” Alanora asked.

“My father collects interesting things,” Kalinda replied. “Odd devices, forgotten technology, whatever comes his way in dusty old ruins and hidden vaults. He must have some of it here, in case of emergency. Hidden.”

“I don’t even know how most of it works!” her father insisted.

“We’re bright girls,” said Kalinda. “We’ll take what we can figure out.”

“You’re not going!” Norgrim said, realizing what her “we” implied.

“Yes I am.”

“No you’re not!” Norgrim declared. “I like Zarah, but to throw your life away –”

“It’s my life and my choice,” Kalinda said, firmly and calmly. “Zarah is more than my friend. I love her, father.

Norgrim looked very confused for a moment.

“That’s part of what upset those Theorists, isn’t it?” Alanora asked. “Under the drugs, she told them how she feels about you, didn’t she?”

“Maybe. Probably,” said Kalinda. “The two of us keep dancing around our feelings, not quite sure what to do. It didn’t happen overnight, and it certainly wasn’t planned. It just happened. And I’ll be damned if those zekts are going to take her away from me.”

“It makes no sense!” exclaimed Norgrim. “You’re both –”

“Yes, we’re both women. I’ve noticed. And we aren’t even the same species. But we make each other happy… as Tohkay once said, does anything else really matter?”

“You discussed this with Tohkay?” His eyes went wide.

“He’s a wise little lizard. I think he’s been talking to both of us, and I should have listened to him sooner. If she dies before I can… well, that’s not going to happen.”

Norgrim shook his head. “You aren’t serious about this.”

“More serious than you imagine,” said Kalinda. “You’d fight a pack of dragons for mother. Alanora risked her life to rescue Kaylen. Don’t deny me the right to protect the person I love. Now – where are your toys?”

Norgrim was silent.

Alanora kicked him.

“Fine, fine,” Norgrim growled. “This way.”

He lead them through the house, to the bathroom.

“You keep toys in the toilet?” Alanora asked.

“Would you look here for a cache of deadly antiques?” Norgrim asked. “What did you expect me to have? A secret door behind a bookshelf?”

“Actually, yes.”

He mumbled under his breath about people who lacked imagination. Taking the top off the toilet’s cistern, he reaching inside; two loud clicks later, the bathtub slid sideways into a compartment in the wall, revealing a stairway down.

They descended quickly. Light came on automatically, revealing a large room, lined with shelves, cabinets, and crates. Devices strange, wondrous, and incomprehensible surrounded them.

“Most of these are dwarven make,” Norgrim said.  “A few come from human ruins or Roqat. I’ve never had time to study them all.” He walked to one set of shelves, and picked up a folded piece of shimmering cloth. With a quick motion, he wrapped it around himself – and disappeared.

“An invisibility cloak?” Alanora asked. “What is this, your collection of clichés?”

His head appeared, disembodied, smiling. “It’s not perfect,” he said. “People will see distortions from certain angles, or when you’re moving.”

Kalinda’s attention was drawn to a complex device. The central component was a long, wide cylinder made from orange-red metal, its surface inscribed with dull blue runes.

“This has a power port,” she said. “Do you have a charged anpheric crystal at two thousand peranils?”

“Careful!” he father exclaimed, tossing the cloak aside and moving quickly to her side. “That thing’s dangerous.”

“Only if I aim it the wrong way,” she said. She pointed to the blue symbols. “This is an ancient form of Dwarven – here’s Istona’s signature mark. She built this! You found this in Roqat, didn’t you?” For the first time in hours, she smiled, but it was a dark smirk Norgrim had never seen on his daughter’s face. “This says something about quantum displacement,” she continued. “That’s one of the principles underlying the harmonic gateways – what’s that whining noise?”

Instinctively, she and Norgrim dropped to the floor. A burst of intense purple light filled the room, accompanied by crackling sounds and acrid odors. They looked to see Alanora rubbing her eyes amid settling dust, holding an object with pulsing red and blue crystals on top.

“That was fun,” Alanora said. “I made your storage room bigger.” In the wall across from her, a smoking hole extended into darkness.

“Gah!” Norgrim said. “What did you do?”

“This looked interesting,” she said, examining the weapon closely. “It had two color-coded sockets, so I plugged in a pair of these glowing crystals from this cabinet. I didn’t know what this button did, so I pushed it. It seems to be working.”

“Be careful!” Norgrim said. “You can’t rescue anyone as a corpse!”

“Why in hell do you hide all this stuff?” she asked. “Why are you afraid of anything? Just this one weapon could –”

“I could conquer all of Syraqua in a day,” Norgrim said. “And so could anyone else who got their hands on my collection. I’ve spent decades keeping Theorist hands off tools like these.” He pointed to a table against one wall. “Those were made by your species, Alanora. You might want to see if any of them make sense to you. Just don’t blow us all up, please. I want to live long enough to see if we survive.”

(more to come)

September 1, 2010
 
Revelations of Darkened Souls is the sequel to A Journey of Dragons. What follows is the opening scene…
Lightning struck the ground, crackle-walking between trees, briefly illuminating a hunched, hooded figure on a nearby path. The path was steep, and the person moved slowly but steadily through the torrential downpour, approaching the unlit castle. Once inside the barbican, the figure stopped, leaning against the wall under an overhang, breathing heavily, a hand gently caressing its rounded abdomen. She looked back at the valley below, and wondered where her pursuers were. She had not seen them, but she knew they were there. He would never let her escape…
“Who is it?” came a deep, melodic voice. “Show yourself!”
The figure moved into the courtyard. The rolling clouds above thundered and flashed; For an instant, she saw water cascading over blue scales, great white wings stretched up, a head with long teeth and silver horns.
“My name is Danelle,” the figure said, pulling back its hood. She bowed, letting her long, wet blond tresses fall over her face. She brushed them aside. “I beg your indulgence.”
“My mother has told me about you,” said Hassakkor with disgust. “You are not one of our friends.”
“That may be so,” Danelle said. “I’ve made… mistakes.” She paused, wincing. “It’s very important that I go to Caerelon. I must speak to Kaylen Thyr.”
“No,” said the dragon. “I am tasked with protecting this place.”
“I am familiar with your mother’s teachings,” the woman stated. “I believe mercy was among them.” Exhausted, she dropped to her knees in the mud. “I am in great danger. Please.”
Hassakkor looked at her carefully, considering.
“You are with child,” he said.
“Yes,” she whispered. Even above the roar of the storm, Hassakkor heard her.
He reached one of his great paws toward her…

Revelations of Darkened Souls is the sequel to A Journey of Dragons. What follows is the opening scene…

Lightning struck the ground, crackle-walking between trees, briefly illuminating a hunched, hooded figure on a nearby path. The path was steep, and the person moved slowly but steadily through the torrential downpour, approaching the unlit castle. Once inside the barbican, the figure stopped, leaning against the wall under an overhang, breathing heavily, a hand gently caressing its rounded abdomen. She looked back at the valley below, and wondered where her pursuers were. She had not seen them, but she knew they were there. He would never let her escape…

“Who is it?” came a deep, melodic voice. “Show yourself!”

The figure moved into the courtyard. The rolling clouds above thundered and flashed; For an instant, she saw water cascading over blue scales, great white wings stretched up, a head with long teeth and silver horns.

“My name is Danelle,” the figure said, pulling back its hood. She bowed, letting her long, wet blond tresses fall over her face. She brushed them aside. “I beg your indulgence.”

“My mother has told me about you,” said Hassakkor with disgust. “You are not one of our friends.”

“That may be so,” Danelle said. “I’ve made… mistakes.” She paused, wincing. “It’s very important that I go to Caerelon. I must speak to Kaylen Thyr.”

“No,” said the dragon. “I am tasked with protecting this place.”

“I am familiar with your mother’s teachings,” the woman stated. “I believe mercy was among them.” Exhausted, she dropped to her knees in the mud. “I am in great danger. Please.”

Hassakkor looked at her carefully, considering.

“You are with child,” he said.

“Yes,” she whispered. Even above the roar of the storm, Hassakkor heard her.

He reached one of his great paws toward her…

August 11, 2010
An Excerpt from the New Novel…

Revelations of Darkened Souls is the sequel to A Journey of Dragons. What follows is a scene that is inspiring quite a bit of artwork, including the cover for the new book.

A bit of background: Three women — the humans Alanora and Zarah, and their dwarven friend, Kalinda — have escaped from a research facility operated by the Theorists, an autocratic group of dwarves who use steampunk-like technologies. To escape, the women commandeered an experimental steam-powered aircraft; they are now being pursued by their enemies…

Alanora fired another short burst. With a satisfied grin, she watched another Theorist flyer spin toward the rectangular fields below. “I think I’m getting the hang of this!” she yelled to her companions.

Hot metal clanged; sparks exploded; the weapon shattered; steam whistled and spewed. Alanora screamed, falling to the floor of the aircraft, leaning against its side, rocking, holding her left hand by the wrist. The flesh was bright red with white streaks of hanging skin. She barely noticed when Zarah crawled through the fuselage to her side.

Another series of impacts shook the aircraft. In the front cockpit, Kalinda brought the plane into a slow turn, the engines trailing steam and other fluids. The craft bucked, shuddered, and swayed. The stick jerked from the dwarf’s hand, and the nose pointed straight downward, toward the trees, spinning wildly. Zarah embraced Alanora, burying her face in the other woman’s shoulder. Kalinda yelled something neither of them could hear. Alanora waited for the impact, wondering what it would feel like.

The hairs on her arm prickled and began to dance.

The shudders and vibrations changed in subtle ways; the forces pressing the women into the side of the fuselage abated. Alanora’s stomach complained less, and she noticed her wounded hand more. Looking through the cockpit hole above, she saw the clouds slowly stop spinning. Then trees came into view; a series of impacts and bumps shook them. There was silence, and stillness.

A blue dragon’s head appeared. Kyazura’s enormous eyes glowed, and so did Alanora’s injured hand. The pain faded, not completely, but enough so that it was no longer overwhelming.

The aircraft moved again, but only slightly. Beneath the dragon’s head, Kalinda’s face appeared. Dark blood ran down her cheek from a nasty cut across her scalp.

“I didn’t know you were hurt!” said the dwarf anxiously.

“I’m not dead,” Alanora replied. “Where are the Theorist aircraft?” She struggled to her feet with the aid of Zarah, surprised at how strong the slight girl was — and embarrassed at how much she needed the help.

Alanora wondered if anyone had ever witnessed a battle such as the one unfolding overhead. A dozen brightly-colored machines trailed white steam, dancing with blue dragons against twilight clouds and sky; the setting sun flashed against scales, metal, and glass. She’d never seen so many dragons in one place at one time, all performing extraordinary acrobatics amid their mechanical enemies — impossible turns, rapid spins, dramatic dives, and rolling loops, far above the ground in a mad dance of war. A large dragon launched a blast of blue plasma into a dwarven aircraft, sending it crashing to the mountainside, a cloud of smoke and debris marking the grave of his foe. The devastating beauty of it all fascinated her, and she forgot her seared hand.

One of the mid-sized dragons was caught between two aircraft, bellowing in pain as it was bombarded by their projectiles. The great reptile wavered, almost falling; two of its comrades arrived, destroying the enemies with deadly efficiency. Then they began escorting their wounded relative away from the fight.

“I must go,” said Kyazura, leaping into the air, joining another elder, one even larger than she: her primary consort, Karfegren. Alanora watched, remembering the joyous reunion flight of Symurall with his mate Kahshiki; theirs had been a passionate embrace of long-separated lovers. What she saw now was something entirely different; Kyazura and Karfegren soared in artful violence, coming together, rolling as one into a pirouette, the air around them glowing, spikes of red flame fanning out from their energetic cloud. Moments later, the mountain was decorated with the smoldering corpses of more machines and their occupants.

Somehow, one Theorist pilots avoided the devastation, firing metal into the great male dragon. Breaking away from Kyazura, the blue-silver Karfegren flipped into a tight turn, slapping the craft with his tail, smashing it to pieces. The dragon grabbed the falling pilot, tearing the dwarf apart in his talons, casting the remains aside in a bloody spray. A roar of victory and anger split the early evening sky.

Alanora glanced at the two women next to her. Neither said anything, their eyes transfixed on the violence above. Moments later, dragons ruled the sky. Kyazura and her mate came to land nearby.

“One of them is escaping!” Zarah shouted, pointing to an aircraft limping away in the distance.

“Yes,” said Karfegren. “I want them to know we are coming.” He nodded toward the women in salute. “I do not believe we have met. I am Karfegren, father of Arrokka.”

“I’m so sorry for your loss,” Zarah said.

“As are we all,” Karfegren replied. His silver eyes flash, sending shivers down Zarah’s spine. “I will ensure that our enemies will regret the murder of my daughter.” He looked at his mate. “Are these are the small ones you spoke of?” he asked.

“Yes,” said Kyazura. “They are as one of our own.”

“Then take them to safety,” Karfegren said. “When our revenge is complete, I will come to see you at this Caerelon you have spoken of. If it is peopled by ones such as these, it must indeed be a great city.” Regarding the women again, he asked, “Are any of your friends still in the research center?”

“No,” said Kalinda. She choked for a moment. “My brother Argrin… he died helping us escape.”

“I shall exact a price for both our losses,” stated Karfegren. For a moment, he studied the dwarven woman. “You are the daughter of Norgrim and Dorna, are you not?”

“I am,” Kalinda said proudly.

“You remind me of them,” Karfegren said. “When this over, I shall write a ballad in honor of you and your companions.” He suddenly launched into the air, joining the dragons already there, leading his flight westward.

Copyright 2010 Scott Robert Ladd. All Rights Reserved.

August 2, 2010
May I present Alanora Thyr, Lady of Caerelon and primary human protagonist of “A Journey of Dragons.” Maria, my adorable mate, wanted to get this just right for me, and since she draws with real ink on paper… well, eprfection takes time. My lovely wife got it perfect; we have our color artist working on the digital version for later…
When I first became acquainted with the world of Syraqua, the first character who came to mind was Alanora. She was just there from the beginning. Heck, she was there before I even knew about Syraqua itself!
But even while Syraqua and Caerelon grew in form and content, I didn’t see Alanora as the main human protagonist.
As I wrote the book, the story unfolded and Alanora’s role increased to the point where she, in some cases, is more prominent that her husband, Kaylen. Their relationship is something unusual… to quote Kaylen from the second book:
“Alanora threatens to use glue and rope to keep this city together. I prefer conversation over beer, and maybe a late breakfast.”
Alanora gives the inspirational speeches and dives into the fray; Kaylen is the negotiator, the one who moderates her passions. Together, they made an unbeatable and unbreakable team.
But it isn’t the story I thought I was writing when I started. The characters had their own ideas of who they were. :)
As for Alanora’s ancestry: The original founders of Caerelon were a combination of Chinese, Vietnamese, and Irish. They were descendants of people brought to Syraqua by the ancient dragons Yssahjorna and Morgrannon, the parents of Symurall, Sytherek, and Kyazura. Yes, dragons abandoned Earth because of humans, but for some reason took people with them.
The book is available, for free, at http://www.syraqua.com
Enjoy.

May I present Alanora Thyr, Lady of Caerelon and primary human protagonist of “A Journey of Dragons.” Maria, my adorable mate, wanted to get this just right for me, and since she draws with real ink on paper… well, eprfection takes time. My lovely wife got it perfect; we have our color artist working on the digital version for later…

When I first became acquainted with the world of Syraqua, the first character who came to mind was Alanora. She was just there from the beginning. Heck, she was there before I even knew about Syraqua itself!

But even while Syraqua and Caerelon grew in form and content, I didn’t see Alanora as the main human protagonist.

As I wrote the book, the story unfolded and Alanora’s role increased to the point where she, in some cases, is more prominent that her husband, Kaylen. Their relationship is something unusual… to quote Kaylen from the second book:

“Alanora threatens to use glue and rope to keep this city together. I prefer conversation over beer, and maybe a late breakfast.”

Alanora gives the inspirational speeches and dives into the fray; Kaylen is the negotiator, the one who moderates her passions. Together, they made an unbeatable and unbreakable team.

But it isn’t the story I thought I was writing when I started. The characters had their own ideas of who they were. :)

As for Alanora’s ancestry: The original founders of Caerelon were a combination of Chinese, Vietnamese, and Irish. They were descendants of people brought to Syraqua by the ancient dragons Yssahjorna and Morgrannon, the parents of Symurall, Sytherek, and Kyazura. Yes, dragons abandoned Earth because of humans, but for some reason took people with them.

The book is available, for free, at http://www.syraqua.com

Enjoy.

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